ILL ((VS)) DANIEL_GRIM

****<FLM Presents>****
ROUND 2!!!

<<{The Deceptive Skills}>>
Championship Tournament!!!
Daniel Snipper Vs Ill-Cyclopx

> #1Round_Maximum
> #4Bars/16lines_Maximum
> #24Hrs_Maximum
> No biting/fliping/recycling/swaying etc...
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> First to check in decides who starts
#Leeegggoo!!!!!
#XoNe45
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Ill-Cyclopx Vee

Aiyo Diz Is DedicaTed To A mendacious Boorish
Twerp''Y'al Knw Wah The ''Homo'' Iz Calld''''LeTz
qet sTarted
Yo! Bone Head Pussy'' I'll Enrip Your SOul Like
The FirsT Kinq Of IsraeL By Circumcizinq Ya
With The SWORD OF SAUL/You a Faker'Yew CnT
See Me. Yew 'Myopic'I'll Smoke u Like Hookah
And Click My GLOCKS TO YA SKULL
You Fvkin Wid A Wronq 'G' I ques You Came WiT
A 'Death sack'Coz U qana qeT Scoop'd By My
Bars With FLAKE OF AGONY/Yew wana SliT In
Sluqz To My Skull Wen Ya Muscle Are ATROPHY
(lmao)U just Diq Ya Grave Of ALLERGY (AlerT
Gee)
Hey! Chump Knuckle Up''You CnT Stand Me Yur
Bars Are FVCKIN TRASH/I'd slap Ya But Ya Shit
Stinqz''Refreshen Up Son En SuiT Ya Sef In
HAWKIN MATTRESS
You a Sack Of Siberian Sheep SHIT who
Consumed A Bowl Of AlphabeT BuT CnT STill
SPIT SmarTer SHIT' Man U A Dump FREAK
I'ma PraqmaTic Gee' Wit ULTRASONIC SOUNDS/
This Nerd qat the IQ of a Lint'His Word Are
False Idols Lyk CACO-PHORNY SOUNDs
(cacophony-Harsh mixture of sounds,Ultra
sonic-Sounds dat ar abov human hearin)
#Lyrical_bandits
#Xone45




DHat Revokedmethus Daniel Snipper

¤DA¥$ OF $U!C!DA¤
_____¤CHECK¤_____
¤LYRICAL HANGING¤
Watch as my "bars go up with gravity" I "spit on
the MOON"||
Yall: i whip this ugly nikka make your bother
[Bassey Asido] and cousin[Patrick Mbora]
witness as I prove you a GOON||
Two jabs to your vocal-cord leave you to speak
in CROON ?..Kid about to die I suggest you ask
for BOON||
Revoked gat "COLD SHIT" itz "POOP IN JUNE"||
dig
This seasonal beast will make you fly away like
MIGRATING BIRDS||
Replace and remove this "human form" and his
crew from deceptive skills like am solving for
SUBTRACTING*HERDS* HEADS||
"Guns loading""head shots" don't act smart or
this lyrical sniper be
DESINTEGRATING NERDS"||
"Coup detat" clear win yall Judges should be
DENIGRATING VERDS||
Expo: [ seasonal(fly away) >migrating birds
that's simple ;
crew itx a group> herds subtracting
(remove) his head outta dep skills come on
simple. Subtracting is all about removing and
replacement ;]
[C]rabbed beast
[C]rashes~[C]hops~en~[C]uts
[C]yclopx's
[C]ranial and [C]ranium
[This bitch be SENSELESS] dig
[C]hoke~and~[C]ease this [C]unt's life
[C]rave off his skin for a [C]oat
[THIS BEAST IS RECKLESS] get
My DECISION to kill or spare him DETERMINES
his DESTINY||
His bars gat low DENSITY I increase his AGONY
sucking out his ENTITY||
'Break you down' ''like" "DIGESTION" eat you IN
||SAVAGE MODE||"like" THIS BEAST GAT
GLUTTONY||
'As' the bible says ill will stand strongly only
aside my great wall of bars 'like' BETHANY||
[expo: decision determines destiny is ill's
favorite quote :
Bethany stood aside jerusalem ]
.
. #Daniel_grim
.#Freestyle
.#Judge_with_precaution
.#Understand_em_bars
.¤-'DAYS OF SUICIDA'-¤




Samflex Enon

Strait BB::VERD!****
OPENER:SNIPER
(.Its Either U Open Yal Flow With Mets>How U
Dangerous Then How U Wil Kill>,or With
Punches Etc,,i Dont See Any Of Those In Vees
Script..Dope Sniper...
CLOSER:both Weak.
METS:VEE.
.PUNCHLINE:SNIPER
MULTIS::SNIPER.
(VEE HAD EM ALL FORCED)...............
RHYMS:NIL..
PUNS:SNIPER
(NO NEED TO EXPLAIN)..
ASSIMILATION:VEE...
ALLITELATION:SNIPER...
Wordplay::sniper(weak)
CREATIVITY:TIE..
FLOW:SNIPER.
(honestly vees flow is kinda hard to get,,am not
sure of some of yo lines dawg).
DELIVERY:TIE.(both Put On It)
CONNECTIVITY:SNIPER.
(like i said about flow)
:::::::::::::::OVERALL MFGVT:DHAT
REVOKEDMETHUS DANIEL SNIPER:::::::::::::::::
:::::::::THIS BATTLE WAS ONE SIDED,,BUT I SEE
PONTENTIAL IN BOTH BATTLERS....SICK
BATTLE..RESPECT.................. #SIGNS_OUT______
_________ENON


Bryant Brothers

DHat Revokedmethus Daniel Snipper takes
this...more direct..more of a BATTLE
verse..word association was better...just tighter
lyrics