Lawrence Casmir Vs micheal olah

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Michael Olah VS Raphael Lawrence Casmir }}
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Raphael Lawrence Casmir
Unleash Death On dz Vex'd Soul(the mob kept
yelling)Too bad,micky boy just stepped into
d'Death Zone
who d fuck do you thìnk you're stepping up to
me you little IMP/I'm your 6ft bitch even Satan
's humming Funeral HYMN
i'm like that dread diabolic butcher i'l scrap
your stale flesh off with a blistered blade till i
turn your peel'd body into BAG OF BONES/His
barz 're like a paint ball gun compar'd to my
titanium magnum pistol that'l drop 'im on his
feet with a single shot,this bitch's Futile words
is pathetic is just like mourinho tryna BRAG OF
GOALS
dz faggot can't throw a better aimed punch at
me even if he had an army of ghostwriters
backing 'im up in this battleField too scared to
brawl with me so he'd just clings to the KING
SIDE/But i've got brutal and fatal punches i'l
sink 'em in his mouth 've 'im choke on it while
stick it deep down his throat and crush his
WIND PIPE
I'm like a TNT i'l keep blowing 'im off into space
like an ASTRONAUT{ass throw nut}in shatter'd
pieces{piss cease}|gave the bitch an adios kick
off~off dz WORLD|/severing his limbs with my
BRASS KNUCKLES,poking his ribs with a kebäb
stick have 'im collapse in [LAUGHS,CHUCKLE
S]while i give hz stomach a hard kick till he
stools in pain,dog you need some anasthetic
{Anal stay thick}?don't think so!none 're allowed
in this BRAWL/|
dz fool boasts he's got balls to take me on
probly thinks he's some double axe gangster
that 've never HELD A STEEL/But i'm murdering
this punk the ancient style like the pharoah's of
old time i'l carve out his head with a nail and
mallet in the shape of pyramids tie 'im up with
rags and throw im off my balcony and 've the
birds feast on his eyeballs as i drop him down
the abyss and 've his corpse roast to dust on
hell's kitchen he's foul stench too gross is like
luciferz chef tryna MEND A MEAL
i'm {F}ucking dz{F}aggot {F}lows with a {F}lip of
{F}lame {L}acedwith {F}iery {F}ire&{L}aying dz
{L}ow {L}ife so{L}ow witha {F}lick of {L}ash is
Like i'm {F}logging a {L}ittle {L}ad//
Today your rap career ends at my hand so bitch
i don't think is something you should cry or
pout ABOUT/So hand me that mic so i can
shove it up your ass and let it stick there as a
death warning,so if you'd try to come bk
blabbing shit i'l give it a throw kick and 've you
puke it out your MOUTH/
Too bad so sad your death happened faster
than i EJACULATE/you think those that use their
cum as COLGATE 'd behold Heaven's GATE?lol
you better rent an apartment in hell 'fore it's
TOO LATE
#PEACE





>>>>>Michael Olah verse<<<<<
<< Punisher >>
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"Death Is A Must, To Trespasserz"
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I'm Jst Here To See The Blood Drips Frm Your
Head/
Watch U Sit There As U & All Your Friends Are
Dead//
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You Must Be Foreign, All My Rapz Are Like The
Alphabet/
Each Letter Confuses U, We All See Where All
That Mouthin Went//
== PUNISHER MODE
The Floor <flour> Pie Ton <python> Gettin
Venom In Your Brain Box WITH MY CURVE
FANG/ Wah? . . . I'm Goin "Hardcore" Here,
With My Pun <porn> Givin This "CLIT TOUGH
BANG// +
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I'm Fiendish To You, To Your LAST BREATH/
Call Me Demon, Frm Revelation. . . So I Bring U
Pains Than The 12TH PLAGUE// +
I Glanced And Found Out That U'v Got PLASTIC
SHIT As Rap, Buh U PASSED THE ELASTIC LIMIT/
U Nw In Your "Breakin Point". . . So I Got U
Dwn With My VERSE, It's SULPHURIC KID// +
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#Final_Death
First. . . I STING U UP, Breakin Your SPINAL
CHORD, Makin U Lame That With Puns/Porns
Your DICK ROSE NOT/ Buh Keeps Fallin Like
"Snow". . . Why? 'cos Your Vertebral DISC
BROKE, CUNT//
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To Be "Pragmatic" Dnt Think Of "Drivin" Away
'cos U'v GOT NO DIESEL < Dizzle >/
This Hell, Im Fillin You With Pains, ALOT NO
NOZZLE Involved//
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This "Raft Hell" / Raphael. . So I'm Done Placin
His Courpse In Timber Coffin, 'Cos U Listened
To The SOUND OF DEATH/
Which "Beat" & Burst Your Eardrum, Then Got
U Imbalance As It Invaded Your "semi Circular
Canal" Then To Your Brain, So Bitch! U Indeed
BOUND TO REGRET//
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#PUNISHER
#FURNACE_SAYGE
#RESPECT_TO_RKF




Rap G LyricalSniper Methus
opener-olah.
close-olah.
multies-olar.
metaz-olah
.wordplay-casmir.
diction-nill.
creativity-nil
l.rhyming ability-olah.
flow-casmir
.mvgt #olah.

Joseph Chinecherem Onyeabor
OPENER:#LAWRENCE.Unleash Death On dz
Vex'd Soul(the mob kept yelling)Too bad,micky
boy just stepped into d'Death Zone
CLOSER:#OLAH,This "Raft Hell" / Raphael. . So
I'm Done Placin
His Courpse In Timber Coffin, 'Cos U Listened
To The SOUND OF DEATH/
Which "Beat" & Burst Your Eardrum, Then Got
U Imbalance As It Invaded Your "semi Circular
Canal" Then To Your Brain, So Bitch! U Indeed
BOUND TO REGRET.>>>> TO BE FRANK THIS
WAS CLOSE AS FUCK.
ALLITERATION:NIL BOTH DIDNT MAKE SENSE
PUNCHES:#OLAH,,,, LAWRENCE could have
easily taken this had he rhyme perfectly
WORD PLAY:TIE.>>>>>>>>>>.BOTH HAD NICE
CONCEPT BUT THE DELIVERY WAS SO BAD.
MULTIS:#OLAH>>>>>>>apparently i dont see
any multi from lawrence or do you see
any??,,lol.
FLOW:NIL (REALLY POOR), IF THIS WAS AUDIO,
Y'ALL DID SOUND AS SHIT,,RAPHAEL STARTED
GOOD BUT END UP TALKIN. WHEREAS OLAH
WAS NO BETTER.
HUMOUR:#lawrence>>>> olah was more
concern on rippin his opponent plus his
friends,,lmfao.
METAS:#OLAH (average), this was close cos
lawrence made references too.
COMPLEXITY:NIL(seriously its more better to
watch fashion show than to read this battle,,lol).
SCHEME:#OLAH , had better organisation
whereas his opponent wanted to win a nobel
prize,,lmfao MVGT:#OLAH 6 1 3. The battle was
a letdown, but olah script was enough just to
take the W.nice battle bros. Thanks for showin
up>>>>>. #now_its_back_to_drinkin_tea,,lmfao



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