Dizy Vs poet

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:No Vanishing
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Dizy Major Blunt

Yeah You Claim You Droppin' Hard Barz Buh
They Comin' Softer Than a Pillow Man They
Weaker Than FLU MR Ibu What Do You Want
Battlin' The New Kid On The Block I'll Make You
Swallow Those Flip-Flops You Wearin' and You'd
still Have No CLUE I hear That You In
SKULLHOOD Ya'll Juhs Make Me Sick I'd Vomit
Ya'll Like DULL FOOD You's Cryin' Yo Eyeballs
Out Cause That Nomvula Song Got You To
INVOKE Look!!!You's Ugly You Make Lucifer Bow
Down And Pray, Smoke a Blunt Cause I'ma Tin
CHOKE Ya I Might Become The Most Famous
JARGON You Live Alone Buh You Still Sneakin'
for Food Mhmmm Even The JAR GONE You So
Skinny Its Like You Suffer From POLIO Shootin'
Blanks Won't Make You The Terminator, You
Don't Have Rap Experience That's Why You
Won't Let Anybody Go Through Yo Blank
PORTFOLIO I Got Hoes Kneelin' Down Suckin'
My Dick Like They Readin' The REVELATION Of
My LIFE I Revolt Against Ya Crew Cause YA'll
Tryna Build a NATION with Ya Leader's WIFE
This Nigga Ain't No Fuckin' Gangster He Don't
Even Know How To Hold a KNIFE Swallow A
Condom Maybe You Might Protect Yo'self From
HUNGER This Nigga Fake He Gon' Imitate
Kendrick and Do The Lame Version Of SING
ABOUT ME I see Ya Got Big Fingers Buh I'd
Murder you Lyrically And Get The RING OUT
FREE.......... Bitch Its AUDACIITY





Metaphorical Poet Jr.

,,,,,,,,,,,[Destructive Poem],,,,,,,,,,

(_\-/_) Drizy dies today!!


_____Drizy u think u got bars? All u did was jux
TRASHING THE PAGE\
U can't even count bars? Those lines are going
to be marked as TRASH IN THE PLACE/
Look son, even if u stamD on a decimal am
pretty sure u COULDN'T BE ON POINT/
Son u ain't a meal for me even if i was a hungry
beast i WOULDN'T FEED ON SLOT/
Imma "CRUST STRIKE" this bitch in 'X' pattern
so they can call him, X-MAN/
With a "RUST KNIFE" Imma stab his neck with,
cut his throat at the NEXT END/
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u've been easily "DEFEATED", force ur ass on
ma hitlist? Now fRom earth u're permanently
DELETED,,,,,,,R.I.P BRO/
Imma chop both ur hands and feet, ur wacky
type will be "DEPLETED' and ur death sentence,
will be DESCRIPTED, /
You spits feels more of ur grany's pussy "LESS
TIGHT"
Hope u get ma "TEXT RIGHT", claiming to be a
thug? Bitch, "LETS FIGHT"
"Am a predator"i feed on meets i hunts,but
drizy will be swallow raw, bkoz he is already
rotten "DEAD MEAT"
(H)e can't (H)ustle (H)is needs so i (H)unt (H)im
(H)arshly just to make "END MEET"
He is WEAK like a paralysed DICK, so i
penetrate HEAT(bars) on his SCREAM TOUCH /
So QUICK i'll go so DEEP in ur mind, flip ur
thoughts, with a KEEN WATCH./

#Skullhood
#PeacefulBars
#FreestyleISSH




Zwelakhe Mthethwa


opener-tie
closer-tie
(your both your closers and openers were
meh...but yea since its in the criteria lets not
argue about this shit and just tie em up)
structure-poet,
multis-poet(major had multis as well but
weren't as consistent as metaphorical's),
punchlines-Poet "even if u stamD on a decimal
am pretty sure u COULDN'T BE ON POINT"
dope shit.
Diction-Major(Poet you even mispelled the
simplest shit B things like this make cats lose
out on this category "bkoz")
alteration-none(i don't normally put this
category down but have to address this coz i
see a lot of cats doing this. yoh this "(H)e can't
(H)ustle (H)is needs so i (H)unt (H)im (H)arshly"
is not alteration im not here to give you an
English lesson but i suggest you listen to
Papoose's "alphabetical slaughter" to
understand what alteration is, now moving on.)
wordplay-none,
disses-Major(not impressive, juvenile if i may
add but atleast you tried)
relevancey-Major(Poet your verse was dope
but to be honest it could have been ment for
anyone infact its a "reusable verse" subliminals
don't work in battle rap unless its a diss track or
something, this category i count higher then
most in real life battles who ever is more
relevant wins but since its cyber world and
points go with who has most criteria then lets
proceed)
flow-Poet,
aggresion-poet,
metaphors-poet,
similes-tie(yoh to you cats who think or classify
similes and metaphors as the same thing y'all
better go back to English class for real)
Poet-6/Major3
MVG-Metaphorical Poet




Jimie L Hunter
Opener....POET
Multies....POET
Closer.....DIZY
Metas.....POET
Simile......DIZY
Punches...DIZY
Delivery...POET
Rhymes...DIZY
Connectivity...POET
Wordies.....POET,
Bt poor tryna make em Complex
POET==6
DIZY== 4
MVGT.... #Metaphoric_Poet <<<Lolz
NOTE: Rhymes and Multies gat Differences, so
they both carry points
SIMILE and METAS also as the Above^^^
Thank yall PEACE!
#Hunter


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